Hi everybody,
This is my very first English-only piece of work. It’s a short story (about 16 pages) about a dragonish creature working as a private eye in a cyberpunk-like setting. I’d like to have your opinions on this, especially about language and likeability of characters, story and setting. I might be using it as a starting point for a later novel or novella, as I already did for a previous piece.
You can find it on my GoodReads account, here: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/24580240-the-egg
Thank you for your consideration!
-MikeT