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Short story critique: "Salvage"

I have a story in the 10k word range that I’m looking for some feedback on. It involves a giant otter (that’s descriptive, not just a particular species) with a dark past trying to overcome it. The setting is vaguely urban-fantasy (elements of science-fiction technology with magic). I’d be happy to exchange critiques with someone or just get non-exchange feedback.

Hi Djagir!

I’m up for a critique trade. I DM’d you my story, which you can read more about in my thread:


If you accept, please feel free to crit mine by email (sage.sylvaine@gmail.com) or directly in my thread. Tell me where you’d like me to crit yours!