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MakiaVi: The Frozen King. Chapter 1 (4256 words)

So this is a decently refined version of my first chapter. I have the next 12 chapters done but they are very rough drafts. If you are fine with grammar and spelling mistakes, I would be ok with linking a few people to the google doc but I would rather go over them a few times myself before doing so. This book is meant to be book one of a ~six book series. I would love to hear any constructive notes you all would pass my way. I am always open to new ideas and making changes when I see them as necessary. Please, tear it apart so it can be rebuilt into something wonderful!

I would rate it as PG. Weapons and mild violence with some mild language.