This is a story I started around 2010. Worked on it off and on again over the last few years. This last few months I finally finished the “big” edit, and now feel that it is in a state to be critiqued in order to decide if I’m going to publish it or not. I would consider going back for more polish, but I could use some feedback to determine if an overhaul of the story is needed, or there are compelling arguments of a flaw in the structure.
I would welcome any and all feedback. What did you like, what did you hate, what is just “meh”…feel free to let me know.
I am definitely willing to trade feedback/critiques, just please understand that I have limited free time and will not be able to reciprocate on a short notice basis. (give me a few days turn around time)
“A Companion’s Journey”
The not so distant future is a place where society now has sentient animals called Companions.
This is the story of one Companion, Karson, in his journey to find a place in the world and his own companionship along the way.
This a novel length work, roughly 90k words, broken up into three parts. I have posted the completed work on FurAffinity as a PDF (requires download). I have also posted the work on Wattpad for viewing online (links follow). This story contains adult themes, and depictions of consensual sexual activity (though not descriptively explicit). There is also some graphic violence (not in sex). The story has a sci-fi element, as well as romantic development of the characters.
Fur Affinity - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/29906416/
Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/172426035-a-companion's-journey