I am looking for critique on my first real piece of “furry” writing (though by far not my first piece of writing). Here are the details:
Russell And The Wolf: A Romance Novelette
Synopsis: When a wolf breaks into Russell’s cabin during a storm, he enlists friends to fight back. But as he develops feelings for her, he tries to call off the attack. Soon, rumors spread that he is harboring a wolf of the kind that devastated the village generations prior. Will he be able to keep their love a secret, or will the village turn against him?
[i]Suddenly, Russell took a hard blow to the back of the head and fell to the wooden floor, dropping his lamp and dagger. By the time he realized what was happening, he was pinned to his back under several hundred pounds of force. With no weapon and no means of escape, Russell tried to make out his captor.
He caught a momentary sight of two gleaming eyes and a dripping canine face above him, then the lantern burnt out and the room went dark. By the heaviness of its breath and the balance of its weight on all fours, he could tell that the assailant was giant, feral and powerful.
In a growling undertone, the wolf spoke to the fox in the darkness.
“Where is your food?”[/i]
Preface and first chapter:
If you think you may be interested in reading more of the story, please DM me or email me at email@example.com and I’ll link you the rest of the novelette, no-obligation. Thanks!