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Coffee anthology beta reads needed. trades are great. 4.2k

I am looking for beta reads/trades for my submission to the coffee anthology. I am still new, so I am looking for/ open to story line feedback, gramar/punctuation feedback and any other help you may be able to offer.

4.25k words
Main characters is a Fennec fox
The story is about smugling coffee cherries into a dog city where dogs have recently died from caffeine overdose.

This is a light happy story despite the dark implications.

Reply here, or PM me. I can be found on twitter @Sonriahwrites, and I am in the writers guild telegram.