Took the route of historical fiction for this one, basing it on the life of silent film actress Alla Nazimova and he relationship with a composite character based on several real individuals. Presently, I just did a self-edit that cleaned up a lot of things but I still have a lot of doubts if there are any areas of the story that are weak/could be tightened up and whether the story is clear enough for the reader to follow along (because I’m an admitted film buff I worry some aspects may be too dense for the reader and welcome any attempt to scale back on anything that isn’t needed towards the overall narrative).
If interested, drop me a DM or reply here with your email address and I’ll gladly send the document along
Thank you so much in advance!