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Anthro story about modern bounty hunter

I’ve recently finished writing the first draft of my story, “Bounty Hunter Uncle”. If you’re interested in beta-reading it, the story is about a anthro named Trevor Finley who works full-time as a bounty hunter (though he won’t admit it and calls himself a bail recovery agent) when his high school niece asks to interview him for a class project.

I’m hoping to go for a gritty but also comedic edge. I’ve also done as much research as I could on the regulations of bounty hunters, but if you notice anything amiss, please let me know. Also try to tell me what you think I could also focus on more in regards to the plot, story or characters.